Suderman+Eric+Glen

Eric Suderman

LGTB peoples have been, and are, discriminated against. Many different people have been discrimonated against though, what makes the LGTB case any different? It's different because there is no nation or Mecca where LGTB people can go to escape being a minority. They are cursed to always be a minority everywhere they go because of the nature of their sexuality. However the internet has a unique ability to collapse the distance between people. Therefore my assignment is about whether the internet can be the location of the LGTB "nation" due to its ability to collapse distance between people.

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Critical Analysis: Subject: Hazel’s Issue analysis ([]) My first comment is on the introduction. It does its job in that it is very informative. It lets the audience know what the site is about, however it is not ideally worded. Perhaps the thesis statement could be broken up into two sentences to improve flow: “ This paper will discuss what the "Digital Divide" is and how they are used; how and why the digital divide is caused; how it affects today's social agents within education and politics, as well as the globalism that became famous practice among business and global market; and what are the short and long consequences of "digital divide". The paper then goes on to define the digital divide very well and provided visual aids on every page to assist in reader understanding. The paper also does a good job of employing relevant sources which are correctly sited in its own page on the website. The conclusion page could be a little briefer but it still provides a nice summary for the paper. All these components make the site readable and interesting. Overall this is a good Issue Analysis.